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(I like the font they use on the cover - cheeky fucker. You know he did it on purpose.)
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Paul watched his mother in the withdrawing room of the Ecaz palace, Jessica seemed stoic and unruffled, not at all troubled about being left alone, and showing no sign that the situation bothered her.
Paul watched his mother in the withdrawing room of the Ecaz palace,
Jessica seemed stoic and unruffled,
not at all troubled about being left alone,
and showing no sign that the situation bothered her.
Freakzilla wrote:Nice lake they've got there on Arrakis.
DuneFishUK wrote:(I like the font they use on the cover - cheeky fucker. You know he did it on purpose.)
Freakzilla wrote:Shouldn't be any clouds, either.![]()
Hunchback Jack wrote:Jessica seemed stoic and unruffled,
Okay.not at all troubled about being left alone,
Unruffled, then, I suppose.and showing no sign that the situation bothered her.
Right. Unruffled. Being that she was, you know, stoic. Got it.
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HBJ
The Hacks wrote:Paul watched his mother in the withdrawing room of the Ecaz palace, Jessica seemed stoic and unruffled, not at all troubled about being left alone, and showing no sign that the situation bothered her.
TheDukester wrote:So, let me get this straight: we're in agreement that Jessica was stoic, unruffled, not troubled, and unbothered, right?
That might be the single-worst sentence ever written in English. I'm dead serious.
At this point, we can only be grateful that Keith was determined to be a writer and not a surgeon.
Nekhrun wrote:Here are some from Sandworms of Dune:
Page 110 A laugh that sounded like vinegar.
Page 161 It was spreading antiflood.
I just happened to have those lying around.
trang wrote:I have no idea what brian does, maybe just sits in an easy chair, colors with crayons, and sips whiskey?
SandChigger wrote:Mention of a contest reminds me: Do we want to do the Dune fanfic contest again this year?
If so, it needs to be started on a certain date in late June.
Serkanner wrote:SandChigger wrote:Mention of a contest reminds me: Do we want to do the Dune fanfic contest again this year?
If so, it needs to be started on a certain date in late June.
This will be the one were we try to write real fanfic and show that we, fans, are better writers than the hacks, no?