practice makes perfect so they say(but we know of a pair to whom the aphorism does not apply don't we ? In this case practice makes...
poop !)
Anyway about the C; I agree and I can see it(the glowing fluorescent shades
hey mum I can write like a best selling author look are not just right either)
I chose speed of execution over attention to detail(considering google shatters my dreams of originality on a daily basis, I thought that if I didn't do it someone else would think of it)
My vanity got the better of me once again, but that's all right because I am not in the position to make a mockery one of the deepest stories that ever crossed mine. Yes Keith vanity, that little voice that tells you you're so great.
EDIT
The same with a few props(and a bit of change at on that extra letter too)
