Dune Haiku
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Muad'dib, hero?
So some say, others do not
But he sure was a bad-ass!!!
So some say, others do not
But he sure was a bad-ass!!!
Poop is funny.
MetaCugel8262 is not.
MetaCugel8262 is not.
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*Gonna fuck this up with my poor knowledge of syllables in English...or in Hebrew for that matter *
Brian must die now
It is the season to kill
Dumbshit hack writer.
Edit: It's 5/7/5, right? That's what Wiki' says.
Brian must die now
It is the season to kill
Dumbshit hack writer.
Edit: It's 5/7/5, right? That's what Wiki' says.
In memory of Perach, who suffered and died needlessly.
I wish I could have been with you that one last time.
I wish I could have been with you that one last time.
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Yes, you are. That last line was almost worthy of Bassho!
(He supposedly once wrote a haiku on the famed islands of Matsushima that goes
Matsushima ya
Aa Matsushima ya
Matsushima ya
"It's Matsushima!
Ah...it's Matsushima!
It's Matsushima!"
Maybe, actually, you're doing better? )
(He supposedly once wrote a haiku on the famed islands of Matsushima that goes
Matsushima ya
Aa Matsushima ya
Matsushima ya
"It's Matsushima!
Ah...it's Matsushima!
It's Matsushima!"
Maybe, actually, you're doing better? )
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Or your all fuckin weird. One or the other.
What we wish, we readily believe, and what we ourselves think, we imagine others think also.
-Julius Caesar
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Frankly I have no idea what the big attraction of haiku is, I find the form dull and listless.
And the really good poetry has to rhyme IMO, call me old fashioned.
Now if GRRM had given a more complete version of it, I might've written The Slig and The Combover Pig here.
And the really good poetry has to rhyme IMO, call me old fashioned.
Now if GRRM had given a more complete version of it, I might've written The Slig and The Combover Pig here.
In memory of Perach, who suffered and died needlessly.
I wish I could have been with you that one last time.
I wish I could have been with you that one last time.
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Huh? You seem to forget where I am.orald wrote:Yea, simpler tastes. No go eat your poached salmon in whatever-Frenchie-sauce with the rest of the aristocrats, I'll have my stake an' taters, TYVM.
Actually, Bint was in a domestic mood this morning and made a Japanese-style breakfast: fried salmon (good call!) and a poached egg, miso shiru and rice with some pickles and a bit of salad on the side. YUM!
(The only French I eat is lunch at the little place near work. I think Teg will verify that they are anything but pretentious. )
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