Master of Masters: a Dune fanfic


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Godemperorjames
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Master of Masters: a Dune fanfic

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https://www.wattpad.com/253136689-maste ... -chapter-1" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;

Here is the first chapter of my fanfic. What do you guys think?!
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Hi Godemperorjames

do you have an introductory text that would tell the reader what he/she is going to read ?
like what/where/when is the plot, what did inspired you, what is your expected publication plan ...

I'm going to read this for sure.
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Here is the second chapter: https://www.wattpad.com/257364904-maste ... -chapter-2" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;

This one is short but I'll add a longer chapter next!
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Here is chapter 3: https://www.wattpad.com/257759656-maste ... -chapter-3" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
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Here is the 4th chapter to Master of Masters : https://www.wattpad.com/258258162-maste ... -chapter-4" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
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Working on Chapter 5 now! This one might take a little longer. This will be mostly a flashback chapter featuring Waff and Ofni during one of their conquests. It will detail Tleilaxu military orginization and the type of weapons at their disposal!

Thanks to all those reading!
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