inhuien wrote:I enjoyed that Eyes, the only feedback I feel comfortable, or should I say able, to offer is that sometime you tended to use 3 words when one would do. Also, Misr, does that term have a canonical use?
Bravo, well done.
Eyes High wrote:I guess I do have a tendency to use too many words, I just want the reader to be able to 'feel' the emotions that drive the character .... and please tell me that didn't sound as lame as it does to me now. (Not the story, the response )
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